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Indigo Esmonde
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I think the original version of The Title is more charming than my compressed version.

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By Indigo, Lyla and Damian

Once upon a time Gogo and Damian lied. They said that Lyla is a criminal. It’s not true. But Lyla went to jail anyway.

Then Damian went to jail for lying about Lyla being a criminal.

Only Auntie Gogo was free. But then Au…

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